101 Don't spoil my sister
The morning reading on this day was an ancient Chinese poem, and the first class that followed was Chinese.
The Chinese teacher is a female teacher over 50 years old. She holds the lectern, and her slightly leisurely look doesn’t look like class, but rather chats with students. Each teacher has different styles, and when this teacher talks about composition and other things, she likes this, which is called developing writing ideas.
"The essays are all pretty good. To be honest, they are pretty good, and there are basically no sentences that are not inconsistent. This means that everyone has listened to what I said before the exam. As for the essay, the first thing to do is to be interesting and clear. The hazy type may also get high scores, but it is too risky."
The Chinese teacher took a sip of wolfberry water and continued:
"So, if you want to get high scores, you have to find a good entry point. What is the topic of this composition? Enjoy life, that's right... I can guess what you want to say. Senior high school students are so busy all day long. How can they enjoy life, right? In fact, this is the best entry point."
Duna in the corner of the classroom listened to the teacher's words and thoughtful.
Among several subjects, Chinese is the one with the lowest scores. Just the inexplicable reading comprehension questions made her feel a little logically uncomfortable. She is even more uncomfortable with the so-called composition.
In the National Academy of Magic, this genius girl can write accurate and smooth experimental records and analysis, but it is really not easy for her to start with such subjective Chinese composition.
Duna looked down at her Chinese test paper, and the '42' on the composition seemed a little dazzling.
The full score of 60 points was deducted by 18 points. There is no doubt that this is where she lost the most points.
The teacher at the lectern was still talking: "The entry point can be a contradiction. Senior high school students are obviously very busy and it is difficult to enjoy life, but who would refuse happiness? Everyone wants to enjoy it, but it is difficult to enjoy it. This contradiction is very suitable for writing argumentative essays. Of course, it is best not to talk emptyly, but add real evidence and true feelings in life so that they can write brilliantly. By the way, when it comes to excellence, you may not know that the only student with full essay scores in the whole grade is also in our class."
Full marks in the composition?
The teacher didn't keep it in hiding much, and quickly said, "Class Qian Yingxue, come up and read it, and let everyone listen to it as a model."
In an instant, the students gave Qian Yingxue a slightly shocked look.
Zuo Rong also turned his head to look at him and said in surprise: "So powerful?"
Qian Yingxue pursed her lips, but still couldn't hold back the corner of her raised mouth. She stood up and whispered, "It's OK."
After saying that, she held up her glasses and walked towards the podium.
Next, Qian Yingxue's performance session was the time to read the essay he wrote.
The girl's voice was clear and she pronounced every word very clearly, without any rush or slowness, so that everyone could hear it clearly. Of course, what's more important is that her writing style is indeed great.
Zuo Rong realized that his deskmate's writing skills had already gained the writing skills that should not be underestimated. It was obviously just the ordinary daily life of a high school girl, but she wrote about helplessness and bitterness, as well as a touch of high-spirited struggle.
After reading, Qian Yingxue returned to her seat. It was accompanied by applause from many classmates in the class. Although the applause was not very neat, it was very sincere.
The Chinese teacher concluded: "Everyone has heard that what Yingxue wrote about what we encounter in our daily lives, such as getting up early, studying, eating, and occasionally playing with your mobile phone to watch pet videos... This is a condition, Yingxue."
Qian Yingxue nodded obediently.
In the corner, Duna was holding the test paper, a little stunned.
Qian Yingxue was obsessed with watching the video... Of course Du Na could hear that the videos of cats, hamsters and rabbits described in the essay were taken by herself!
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After the Chinese class, Du Na came to Zuo Rong and Qian Yingxue's seat again.
Qian Yingxue and Zuo Rong were a little used to it and stood up. One stood up to make room, while the other was about to go out.
However, Duna said: "Class Qian Yingxue, I'm looking for you."
Zuo Rong: "?"
Qian Yingxue: "??"
Facing the puzzled eyes of the two, Du Na solemnly said: "I want to know, how did your composition be written so well? That video is me..."
Qian Yingxue smiled and interrupted, "I know, the video was taken by your brother, right?"
Duna glanced at Zuo Rong and couldn't help laughing: "That's right."
Qian Yingxue: "But both of you have not as good as mine. The reason is very simple. How to use very few words to grasp the key points in a scene is actually a very difficult thing. To be honest, I can't tell you any secrets, because I practiced hundreds of thousands of words repeatedly."
Duna's big eyes widened even more, and her beautiful eyes were filled with shock: "Hundreds of thousands of words!"
Zuo Rong understood something and asked, "Where are you writing a novel?"
Qian Yingxue nodded: "It has been posted on the female website and signed a contract. I used my mother's ID card. Although I didn't make any money, I just wrote it to play..."
Zuo Rong: "Are there any readers?"
Qian Yingxue: "It should be considered as there is one, but the comments they posted are all urging updates, which is too boring."
Zuo Rong: "So what's the name of the book you wrote?"
Qian Yingxue: "The dry road is in the blood."
Zuo Rong: "..."
Duna: "??"
Qian Yingxue enthusiastically explained: "It's the blood of platelets, the drought of drought..."
Zuo Rong interrupted, "Do your mother know? She knows, does the book you wrote with her ID card call this name?"
"It's good not to tell her!" Qian Yingxue turned to Du Na and smiled, "Do you want me to recommend some good novels to you? Maybe it can improve your writing skills."
Zuo Rong flatly refused: "Don't take my sister badly!"
Du Na looked at the two of them, her delicate and fair face was still full of confusion.
Chapter completed!