After two and a half months of struggle, the first volume of this book was finally finished!

This process is really not easy.

I remember that when it was first released, I only had a collection of 1,000 yuan and a hundred book orders. According to the existing subscription algorithm plus full attendance, the manuscript fee of less than 1,000 yuan per month made me unable to expect any expectations.

But just like what I said in my comments on the shelves, because I believe in miracles, I have been persisting until now.

It has only been twenty days since it was put on the shelves, and my collection has increased from 1,000 to 10,000 now, and the orders have barely reached the 500.

To sum it up in a simple way, it means that you have enough money and readers who follow this book can have hope.

However, with more people, the headache comes.

This book is very complicated, not only the background settings, but also the writing style.

Because I don’t write much, there are many areas that need improvement when studying.

But now I want to complain about some poisonous points that I unexpectedly arise.

The first one: The plot of the fight is too awkward

In addition to the plot of making his debut and Ji Youzhu later, this paragraph also wanted to practice fighting scenes. At that time, I revised the fighting scenes of Gu Huniao for a long time. Although I was not sure how much I learned, many people said it was awkward.

I was confused at first, but I thought that there was really nothing outstanding, so I just kept a doubt.

(Voting is welcome, but it may spray me on autism and update it, please lick it more.)

The second one: Lin Yumu

The response of her and Ji Youzhu just appeared was what shocked me the most.

How did Lin Yumu come about?

When I was about to write there, I happened to watch a video of a very popular straight man quote. I thought the jokes inside were very interesting, and then I caught the liven up the atmosphere.

Later, in order not to seem too crazy, she also added her behavioral motivation.

But I never thought that many people would like her to die!

I can understand if she is a self-professional person, but wasn’t Xu Qiufan also a self-professional person before appearing?

Why did Xu Qiufan not see anyone scolding him, but was scolded by a female character when he was called NT. What would be the best thing to die?

I was shaking all over on the spot and my hands and feet were cold.

This is a caricature of sand!

In addition to these two female supporting roles, I had several anti-routine jokes just now, and a irritable brother started to make up for the plot and helped me drive people away. My brain hurts.

I understand why so many people ask for no heroine, it is really difficult for female characters. Traditional White Lotus is scolded, but a little more realistic, because readers do not read books like authors, and may not necessarily notice the relationship between the character's personality and behavioral logic, and then substitute themselves.

This level is really hard to control.

Third: The Dream of Thousand Cats

Anyway, we both liked it, so I buried a lot of pitfalls.

I'm happy!

I'm finished angrily.

Now I announce that everyone who raises books can start slaughtering.

Due to my outrageous typing speed, I know that many people are raising books.

However, because chasing the subscription will affect the subsequent recommended resources, I urge everyone not to keep it after reading it for a while. At least I can help me subscribe to the automatic subscription so that this book can go further.

Here, thank you for yourselves in advance.

(PS:1, the last chapter has one thousand words, and it was written at 5 o'clock. The biological clock will collapse tomorrow. It is estimated that the second is later, so I will preview it in advance.
Chapter completed!