Chapter 622: How to modify it?

A few days later.

Finally, it was the last revision of the script.

In the script conference room.

Everyone was a little embarrassed.

Everyone has brainstormed, but no one can come up with any good ideas.

Everyone's abilities have been drained.

Even Lang Qianfan was rarely calm.

Then he said with a look of embarrassment: "We have no comments to add!"

After saying that, he looked at the person opposite him: "Where are you?

Any ideas?"

Everyone on the opposite side shook their heads, and no one said a word.

Lang Qianfan breathed a sigh of relief: "So, this script is already perfect."

He looked at Lin Fan: "Mr. Lin, it seems that today's meeting was in vain. You can go directly to the next stage!"

Lin Fan said, "I have some ideas."

Next, Lin Fan explained the modification opinions given by the system.

Lang Qianfan looked stunned: "What?

"The world is the world of the people of the world. We must make a fuss for the ants" spirit is too ignited and too passionate, but too second-class?"

"So we need to create obstacles to make Jiang Ziya's head tilted by the sky, and to make Jiang Ziya closer to the audience?"

After Lang Qianfan finished speaking, he looked at Lin Fan with horror.

This person is a devil, and by this time, he can still give such a core revision opinion directly.

Obviously, everyone thought the work was perfect before.

But now Lin Fanyi said that everyone thinks, well, it can be better.

Lang Qianfan, who was so arrogant just now that he felt that he didn't need any modification, suddenly turned slightly red.

He licked his lips and asked without shame: "How to modify it?"

At this moment, everyone looked at Lin Fan.

The problem was indeed found.

But it is very difficult to change such a core thing.

"In one word, family affection, what the audience can empathize most is the relationship between people."

"If one person is the cousin of another, then the audience will naturally understand what this means."

"So, before Jiang Ziya became a god, as an ordinary person, he wanted to protect some relatives, but because of the war, these people died and were injured.

This is naturally understood by the audience on the empathy of family affection.”

"Once upon a time, watching the weak child die in front of him, and once upon a time, the elderly starve to death on the roadside, and cannot be rescued. These are the regrets before Jiang Taigong became a god."

"After becoming a god, when you see an innocent young human soul who wants to be destroyed with the demon fox, at this time, with the preparation of the previous one, the audience, as a human, also has such a regretful feeling, the audience will want to rush forward to save people.

I didn’t have the ability before, but now I have the ability, why not save me?"

Lin Fan's words made everyone's eyes lit up.

Why did Jiang Ziya become a god because she wanted to protect those weak people.

And because of one regret after another that once made people miss, there are subsequent choices.

It is not an idealism to make a fuss for ants.

It is an obsession that everyone can understand, an emotion that belongs to human beings.

In this way, Jiang Ziya's distance from the audience was closer.

The regret of family affection is the most resonant.

The weak tribe members died, and the elderly elders starved to death.

A kind person disappears like duckweed under the gears of fate.

What is the purpose of becoming a god?

Will Jiang Ziya have such a question?

Next, the people in the conference room began to discuss.

The final plot of Jiang Taigong is perfected for the last time.

If someone asks, the plot this time should be perfect, right?

Everyone's answer is definitely yes, no, just go and search and you will definitely find the imperfect place again.

But now it's close to perfection.

This is the last plot change.

After Lin Fan gave the revisions, everyone spoke freely.

Some people said, "Jiang Taigong finally cut off the ladder of heaven and made a choice for the people of the world, so that everyone can no longer live by "no one's life!"

Cut off human dependence on gods and let them create a beautiful and happy life through humanity's own efforts.

This approach is a bit far-fetched. After all, human beings’ dependence on gods is not changed because of Jiang Taigong’s actions.”

Therefore, after everyone's discussion, they all felt that after Jiang Taigong made the crimes of Tianzun public, the people would make their own choices.

When the people walked into the temple one by one, they pushed the statue down.

When a temple is burning.

When the people who suffered after the war tore up the talisman.

The ladder collapsed and collapsed bit by bit at a speed visible to the naked eye.

Finally breaking.

When facing the collapse of the ladder, the Heavenly Lord tied himself up in a cocoon and became a public enemy of the divine realm and was attacked.

Does such a picture show more specifically that "no one's life cannot control it!"

It is achieved through the hands of the people, not Jiang Ziya's.

At this time, a manager suddenly said: "But in this way, the first part adds too many plots to lay the groundwork for Jiang Ziya's character, and the later part adds too many plots after the incident is exposed! This leads to the story being too long!"

"Yes, it was originally a two-hour story, but now it has become a four-hour story!"

Everyone looked at Lin Fan.

This is the sequelae of constantly improving the plot.

As a result, although the plot is perfect, the preparation is laid, the explanation is explained, and the recovery is done, the time is too long.

The original script has now doubled its thickness.

Everyone was stunned.

What else can I do?

Logically speaking, a movie can't be filled with so many plots in 120 minutes.

Subconsciously, everyone looked at Lin Fan.

Lin Fan is now very satisfied with the final result of the plot.

Seeing that everyone finally reacted, he immediately smiled disconcerted and said, "Then it is divided into two episodes. The first episode is Jiang Taigong's life and choice. He was demoted and thought about his mistakes when he let go of the fox demon. The next episode is to discover the conspiracy and overthrow the ladder."

Lin Fan looked like he was not a problem at all.

It made everyone feel relieved.

Yes, movies can also be released in the first and second episodes.

As long as the story is exciting enough, the audience will naturally be willing to follow it.

that's all.

The movie, which originally had only 120 minutes, became 240 minutes.

This increases the production cycle of the movie.

After the meeting ends.

A latest script is also released.

Looking at the script, everyone thought of the original appearance of the script at the beginning.

They couldn't help but be amazed.

In a month, a script with many loopholes has become as perfect as it is now.

fear.

Lang Qianfan was the first person to sigh.

At the beginning, they were able to find the loopholes and were able to be proud.

In the end... I can only be amazed.

So much so that at the end of the meeting, Lang Qianfan looked at Lin Fan's back and felt a little awe-inspiring.
Chapter completed!