Chapter 185: Thoughts after reading the main animation, and some thoughts written until now

Author: Original Seventh Generation

Chapter 185: Thoughts after reading the main animation, and some thoughts written until now

First of all, Amiya is really kind. I feel so heartbroken when I see it, and I feel very sad.

Secondly, the plot, copywriting, etc. of the animation can completely crush yj's early copywriting, and the tension in yj's early copywriting is still insufficient.

I think one of the main reasons for this is the lack of description of expressions and emotions. YJ's copywriting does not describe content about "atmosphere", "expression", "breathing", etc., and there is still not much in the later copywriting.

Change.

Also, I feel that Xia Lan is too indifferent to life. Now I have directly or indirectly cut down 500 people. Not only are there unforgivable enemies, but also those confused ordinary soldiers driven by the confusion.

It is completely incompatible with Rhode Island's values...

But if you don't cut it, I think it's too Virgin. After all, their essential definition is still a group of thugs. Some people may have a lot of blood from civilians on their hands, so I was quite contradictory when I wrote it, and even wrote it intently.

Some:

"He is not a good person at all, but his personality is self-righteous and very bad in the eyes of ordinary people..."

Such additional descriptions, and often I can't help but emphasize this, I feel quite contradictory.

The original intention of writing this book is to imagine that if I arrive at the world of Ark of Tomorrow,

What would I want to do?

How would I want to choose?

What would I want to get?

How should I treat life and death?

What's the ending I want?

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Out of the incompleteness of the world view described by Ark Tomorrow (actually, it is quite colorful and much better than when I started writing a book), I wrote it like a thin ice, and even reopened it for it just to write it.

Expose the closest possibility in your mind.

Because I really like it so much, I want to write it as much as possible to fit its worldview, and I am willing to take the initiative to stop when I encounter serious lack of information.

... Fortunately, there is no big loophole written at the moment, and some small problems can also be explained by "The protagonist has come to this world three times before."

At the same time, the gospel is finally coming, and yj will release a set of the worldview of Ark of Tomorrow. That thing should be quite useful, and I can only say that I must buy it... I just don't know how long it will take to arrive, and whether it will be collected early

The book lovers who come here can send it to me first (the same is true for choosing important content and scanning the code to make an idea document)...

Just a little uneasy.

Due to the limitation of personal writing style and plot design ability, there is no need to have much high expectations. Perhaps the combat power of writing will soon collapse, although it is already so fierce now... not to mention the decision to find Ling later

Want to [Xiaoyao] (manipulating time and space).

Also, I still didn't think about the ending, but it must be related to fighting the big boss above the starry sky, whether it is good or bad is not necessarily good.

However, it is obviously stable for the time being...

It's stable for two days and three thousand (laughs), I remember that I was 4,500 a day at the time... and then I failed the exam, and I still had several exams (wow woo woo woo woo woo woo woo woo woo woo woo woo woo woo woo woo woo woo woo woo woo woo woo woo woo woo woo woo woo woo woo woo woo woo woo woo woo woo woo woo woo woo woo woo woo woo woo woo woo woo woo woo woo woo woo woo woo woo woo woo woo woo woo woo woo woo woo woo woo woo woo woo woo woo woo woo woo woo woo woo woo woo woo woo woo woo woo woo woo woo woo woo woo woo woo woo woo woo woo woo woo woo w

It’s quite interesting to write novels. You can beat whoever you want and die whoever you want.

If I had written "I am a fanatical Scarti single-push person" without impulsiveness, I could actually add the "whoever I want is the day I want", of course, I mean an adult beautiful girl.

Actually, I don’t feel much about the other beautiful characters I wrote. Even if I don’t write them as single-speakers, I won’t accept them. They tend to know friends who know one side of the protagonist.

——What Minar knows is the lone soul and the eternal pursuit of the bonded land.

——What Wei Yuelan knew was the mystery that transcends all destiny and the power to change the direction of the world.

——What Xia knows is the gentleness to her family and her stubborn idealism that she doesn’t grow up.

——What Chen knew was personal heroism and trouble-making physique.

——What I know is the ultimate god essence that endlessly plunders everything for one's own use.

——What Kelxi knew was the fate of a different world pressing on his shoulders that made him wander in the infinite cycle of life and death.

...

In fact, I still have the urge to accept the ghost shark. After all, she is so seductive, and she is one of my favorite royal sister characters, and there is also the factor of loving the house and the womb...

Now is, fantasy time!
Chapter completed!