Chapter 68 A very popular essay with full marks!

Author: Drunk and smiling lady

Chapter 68 A very popular essay with full marks!

If "The Death of the Red Rabbit" became popular and famous in the earth world because it was a refreshing essay for getting a perfect score in the college entrance examination, then it became popular and caused controversy in this parallel world because

, the person who wrote it is Xu Qingru.

Otherwise, as a perfect essay for the mid-term exam of the first year of high school, it would not cause much trouble.

Xu Qingru was the "most military training goddess" at the beginning, although now her status is considered outdated and she doesn't have much traffic anymore.

But don’t forget, she is also the up owner of Xiaopo Station.

After the "Haiyan" video, she did not stop updating.

With the help of his brother Xu Mingwei, he successively produced and uploaded several videos, all of which were original songs with a literary and artistic flavor - "Old Friends Who Don't Know When to Return", "Living Through Thousands of Lands", and "Leaves".

These original songs are not popular, but people who like them like them very much, and their fan loyalty is extremely high.

There is a line in the song "Leaves" that has become popular, and it is exactly that - loneliness is the carnival of one person, and carnival is the loneliness of a group of people.

However, this lyric has become popular, and many people like to use it as their Fetion signature, etc., but not many people know its origin.

All in all, Xu Qingru's identity as the "Treasure Up Master" is still recognized by many people. The traffic that was once like duckweed has slowly transformed into her loyal fans.

Moreover, her collection of modern poems "The Collection of Birds" has been distributed on the Internet and has been widely circulated.

Her name is somewhat famous in contemporary poetry circles.

With the help of her mother Li Yian, "The Collection of Birds" will soon be published in physical form, which will further increase her fame.

In addition to "The Collection of Flying Birds", Xu Qingru also continues to publish essays in the purely literary magazine "Cape", which has also gained her a group of fans who are literature lovers.

Whether it is the article "Haiyan" or "Hurry", readers who like them really like them.

She also recently published an essay called "Warming a Pot of Moonlight and Drinking Wine". Just by virtue of this title, many literature lovers felt a strong literary and artistic atmosphere.

And the text did not disappoint them——

"If boiling snow is really a thing, other things can be left behind. We can use an empty bottle to store tonight's sweet-scented osmanthus fragrance. When the sweet-scented osmanthus fades and autumn passes, we can open the bottle cap and taste it carefully.

Put the warmth of first love in an exquisite glass box. When we are old and our youth is over, we can open the lid and feel a stream of warmth, which is enough to comfort us.

There are many unexpected touches in it, such as putting the moonlight in a wine pot and warming it over a slow fire to drink... There is a true meaning in this, and it is the realm of the wine fairy.

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After reading her article "Warming a Pot of Moonlight and Drinking Wine", many literature lovers feel like they are enjoying the moonlight and drinking wine, which is so refreshing!

Coincidentally, Cheng Wenkang, a special teacher at the High School Affiliated to Jiangnan University and leader of the Chinese teaching and research group, also saw this essay.

After he had a good time, he suffered from an occupational disease and felt that this prose was quite suitable for Chinese reading comprehension questions...

Cheng Wenkang did not specifically record the name of the author of this article, otherwise he would have couldn't help but mutter, why was it that the prose he was reading was written by Xu Qingru, and the full score essay "The Death of Red Rabbit" that he had just corrected was also written by Xu Qingru?

He might not believe that the two Xu Qingru are the same person.

After all, the literary realm of a high school student's composition like "The Death of the Red Rabbit" cannot be compared with the famous prose piece "Warming a Pot of Moonlight and Drinking Wine".

All in all, just because Xu Qingru is well-known on the Internet as a "literary girl", "folk singer", "prose writer", and "modern poet", and because her looks are indeed too good, she naturally has the qualifications

Hype value.

It turns out that the news that Xu Qingru got "No. 1 in the city" in the exam this time, coupled with her perfect score in the essay "The Death of the Red Rabbit", only existed as a hot post in the "Jiangzhou No. 1 Middle School Bar".

The posts were full of students from the school who admired her, and there were all kinds of jokes, so that Song Shuhua, a foreign war waste and prisoner, quickly came out and apologized. They even played with photos of Song Shuhua, and put Song Shuhua's head on a dog's head.

Xu Qingru’s profile picture was posted on the head of a person holding a pet dog...

Thus, a "world-famous painting" of Xu Qingru holding her pet dog Song Shuhua was born. Unfortunately, this spoofing P-picture was directly deleted by the authority. They believed that such a P-picture was too excessive.

The funniest thing is that someone directly pointed out that actually everyone still envies Song Shuhua, after all, he can be Xu Qingru's dog, while other people are just mice, and there is no possibility of being raped.

It feels like a joke from hell.

However, the atmosphere of Tieba is like this. It is full of grumpy old men who are very aggressive. Whoever takes it seriously will lose. The main focus is abstraction, jokes, and pranks.

As time goes by, the hot posts about Xu Qingru in the campus post bar will definitely gradually decrease in popularity.

What I didn't expect was that I didn't know whether it was the students from Jiangzhou No. 1 Middle School who were in trouble, or it was really the students from the High School Affiliated to Jiangda University who were causing the trouble.

Someone actually reposted Xu Qingru’s hot post to the post bar of the High School Affiliated to Jiangda University, and then posted it in a disgraceful way——

"It is said that the high school with the strongest liberal arts in Jiangzhou City and even the whole province is the High School Affiliated to Jiangda. However, in front of Xu Qingru, the liberal arts emperor of Jiangzhou No. 1 Middle School, it is nothing but rubbish!"

"Yu Bingwei, a prisoner of the foreign war at the High School Affiliated to Jiang University, comes out!"

"Everyone kneel down and worship the perfect composition "The Death of Red Rabbit" by Xu Qingru, the great Chinese liberal arts emperor next door!"

"I really cried with laughter. Before the rankings in the city came out, a bunch of filial sons and grandsons of Yu Bingwei from our affiliated middle school were boasting that she was the best in the city. But in the end, not only was she completely defeated in Chinese, which she was best at, but she also fell short in science.

How much does Xu Qingru..."

"It is said that Yu Bingwei is the most talented girl in the High School Affiliated to Jiangda University, and no one can match her writing skills. So can she write a composition like "The Death of the Red Rabbit"?"

"If you can write shit, you have to do it in a tense examination room. Yu Bingwei is talented, but she is not quick-thinking at all. Xu Qingru is the real genius!"

"I really don't know how a girl like Yu Bingwei, who can only be regarded as pretty, is so popular in Jiangda High School. If it were Xu Qingru, I would never dare to think about it!"

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Yu Bingwei is indeed a prominent figure in the freshman class of Jiangda High School and is recognized as a talented woman.

Although her grades were not as strong as Song Shuhua's, who firmly ranked first, she had never fallen out of the top ten in the school.

She is also better at liberal arts and weaker at science, so this city-wide unified examination will also benefit her.

Her final ranking was first in the school and second in the city.

It can be said that if there had not been a guy like Xu Qingru who came out of nowhere, then Yu Bingwei would have been the biggest winner in this city's unified examination.

Yu Bingwei is very popular in Jiangda Affiliated High School due to her handsome appearance and extraordinary talent.

She was invited by the president of the school's literary club to "visit the thatched cottage three times" and joined the literary club, becoming a mainstay.

In every issue of the school newspaper, she has her works published in it, with diverse themes and gorgeous and beautiful writing.

All these factors have given Yu Bingwei many fans.

In the campus forum of the High School Affiliated to Jiangda University, I often see people posting posts to praise her from various angles. Even her appearance, which can only be considered pretty at first, is directly worshiped as a goddess with the blessing of the talent filter.

Maybe it was because of all kinds of embarrassing boasts that she encountered a "backlash" recently. Some students from the middle school affiliated with the school who had a rebellious mentality directly invited Xu Qingru from the No. 1 Middle School to be their tool and stepped on Yu Bingwei!

"The Death of Red Rabbit" has become their output tool.

And Yu Bingwei's supporters, after being ridiculed in this way, certainly would not give up and began to rebut in various ways. At the same time, they also attacked the perfect essay "The Death of Red Rabbit".

Their counterattack was not limited to the campus post bar, but further opened up the battlefield, and even started the verbal war on Zhihu.

In this era of this parallel world, the reputation of "Zhihu" is not bad, and it is not yet considered "powerful" or ridiculed as "share the story you just made up". It can be said that all walks of life are involved in "Zhihu"

There are quite a few elites and big shots.

"How to evaluate the perfect essay "The Death of Red Rabbit"?"

This issue was suddenly heated up by both sides who were arguing!

The key point is that the two sides were arguing, and it was not just the students who were arguing. Many netizens who were watching also participated in the fight, and they were all quarreling with each other.

Under this question, the respondents were also clearly divided into two groups. Some people looked down upon this perfect essay at all——

"Thank you for the invitation. As a senior Chinese teacher, I think the level of this essay is very low and off-topic. I will give it a 38 out of 60 points."

"Objectively speaking, the wording and sentences are not literal, plain and formal, and have a serious sense of violation. In modern terms, it means that there is a lot of English mixed with Chinese.

Chitu: I am a horse. My rider used to be Lu Bu, but after meeting Guan Yunchang, I was moved by his integrity. He is my Mr. Right. Now that he is dead, I don’t want to live anymore. Just be a jerk.

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“Looking at the death of Red Rabbit based on the requirements of the article, the intention is not profound, the language is too lame, and the angle of entry is quite novel.

If I were a big fool and had never seen the world, I would give this examination essay 60 points, but I am already 26. If I were to judge the paper, I would only give her 42.

To be honest, there are countless 18-year-old ancients who have written better articles than The Death of Red Rabbit. Getting full marks for such an essay only shows that things are not as good as they used to be."

“Personally, I feel that it is at an average level of rubbish, and the level of the marking team is too low. Although it is not a zero score, it is at most a little higher than the entry score, but far from the full score level.

This article has been very popular on the Internet recently. I heard that it is written in classical Chinese, but it turns out that it is in ancient vernacular.

Unfortunately, the students are not good enough and the writing is neither fish nor fowl. The storyline is also very average.

In fact, this is a typical off-topic essay, which is just a gimmick for semi-classical Chinese writing, just hyped up.

What it writes is loyalty, not integrity. Although loyalty and integrity overlap, they are two different concepts.

Of course, in order to avoid digressing from the topic, the author uses a third-party perspective to make the comments honest.

I can only say that the author is clever, but his literary talent is really not good!"

“I’ve read too many ancient texts!

This short article is ordinary, the writing is neither clear nor white, the language is as childish as a swaddled baby, and the shallowness of the skills is fully exposed.
To be continued...