——Book friend "High Voltage Electrician"

Reading notes and second part of "The Concubine" and the writing of "The Concubine"

I read all the concubines for several nights in a row. In addition to the pain in my eyes and lack of sleep, I also have some gains, and I will share them with everyone and the author.

I have been on Qidian's website for many years and have read countless novels, but I think the good ones are nothing more than Huiming, Jingnan, ＊＊ (Forget it! It is about Emperor Hongguang of the Southern Ming Dynasty) and the Concubine Record. The author of the Concubine Record uses his high-level writing style to tell the magical experience of a modern forensic doctor in ancient times (not praising the author), which makes people unable to stop. A large number of emotional dramas interspersed, which makes readers fall in love with it while being intoxicated, forming a sharp contrast with the obscure foreign literature (personal views do not represent the overall situation. Because the long-standing foreign literature is not mediocre, it is just a lifestyle and speaking way that is incompatible with me, not a satirical foreign literature).

The novel has poured in a lot of effort from the author, which can be seen from the rigorous writing style. The plot is coherent and can be tied up at the beginning. Once a case is settled, another case is on the rise, making it a fine product of detective novels. (Another statement: it is not to praise the author) I personally like reasoning, and of course I also like detective novels; I like ancient literature, history, and naturally like historical time travel novels; I don’t like love literature very much, but this is an exception.

It is a bold assumption to change history based on a modern person back in the past and everyone hopes to see. However, this novel does not deliberately change history, but the protagonist gradually turns from an ordinary little coroner to a powerful minister in the court. His family has many wives and concubines, and his family is rich. It is what everyone pursues. It is yy's, and it is inevitable that he is popular.

A novel makes people scream after reading it, and there are many readers, which is what some casual novels pursue. The story of taking a concubine is not far from y, which is in line with the normal development trajectory. The protagonist ascends step by step to the sky and stands in an invincible place in the temple. Truth will win, and justice will win!

The novel quotes a lot of historical facts and historical knowledge. When reading novels, he gains historical knowledge. When reading novels, he applies a lot of common sense of human anatomy and forensic knowledge. When reading novels, he gains medical knowledge and anti-detection knowledge... (Yu, the book is back to the main story). Before reading novels, who knows how many sons Zhu Di has? What is the title? What is the relationship between the superiors and subordinates of the Jinyiwei? What is the administrative region of ancient counties, prefectures, and prefectures? Who knows the structure and pelvic form of the human body? Who knows what the difference between the dead and the fake dead?... It was after reading this novel that I realized (I personally knew it earlier, haha). It should not be an exaggeration to say that he is a popular science book.

It is worth a good work, without excellent writing style, and attractive plots are not good, especially this romance novel with the purpose of solving cases. It must have rich history and forensic professional knowledge. After praising this novel for a long time, you have to use facts (use evidence, haha). I advise those who have not read it or read it quickly. There are not many good books.

There is a saying that ＊＊ is a regretful art, and novels are no exception, including this novel. Some authors still leave some regrets. I think Mu Yi has also devoted a lot of effort to revise the manuscript (Brother Mu said: nonsense.)

There are many problems left in the novel (I saw it, the word "wrong" is not counted), it is in detail, so let me spit it out. 1. Chapter 24, Yang Qiuchi killed the tiger and made it a piece of tiger meat and bones for the little black dog to eat. I guess it is enough to not eat tiger meat. Tigers are the king of beasts. Dogs will run away when they see tiger hair, but they dare to eat tiger meat and bones? (I heard from the old people that there is no basis. However, I have seen a joke about a tiger in a zoo being bitten away by a tied dog, and the myth of the king of beasts is also shattered.)

2. (Not in the order of chapters) Yang Qiuchi was named Zhenyuan Bo, and Zhenyuan Hou was fine. In the end, he was named Zhenguo Duke, but he was unhappy. The heroes of the Ming Dynasty were named Duke X (Yang Ling was named like this in the Ming Dynasty, becoming Duke Wei Guo). However, the generals of Zhenguo and General Feng Guo were all titled by the Ming Dynasty, so it was inappropriate to use him as a duke. In the Ming Dynasty, there was indeed a title of Duke Zhenguo, which was given to Comrade Zhu Shou (the "alias" of Emperor Zhengde of the Ming Dynasty, which was considered a mess). It would be better not to give it to the hero.

3.316 Chapter 316 The passage of the Ming Chengzu's intention to give Yunlu to the third prince Zhao Jianwang Zhu Gaosui as his concubine was also unhappy. Jian is a posthumous title, and it is not appropriate to call a person at that time (there has been no longer the title, maybe Brother Mu). Even the title of Chengzu should be changed to Emperor Yongle (or it is better to call him Emperor directly). Many people in Japan like to call Emperor Heisei, but it is not appropriate to call him Emperor Heisei, (although little Japan is not very good, it can be done for a long time, and it is impossible to do anything randomly) In modern times, the emperors of Japan have all used the posthumous title of the year. The title of the Japanese is such as Emperor Taisho, Emperor Showa is different from Emperor Zhengde of China, Emperor Qianlong, and is still the same as Emperor Wu of Han and Emperor Yang of Sui. (Please skip it if you don't know the history)

4. The Qingxi County, Zhenyuanzhou, where Yang Qiuchi was the county magistrate, belonged to the Wuyou County of Zixu Prefecture. There was no Qingxi County in the Ming Dynasty, but Zhenyuanzhou. See the Ming Dynasty Volume 45, Chronicle No. 21, Geography 6. It is probably a banished state, so why not find a real place? Of course, this is not a problem, I am nitpicking, but I just hope that the novel is more "real".

5. Chapter 279 Yang Qiuchi solved the case in Yizhi'an. He grasped the round nature and found out that it was based on the dried chopped green onion on the round nature's feet. Monks (Chinese Buddhism) do not eat onion, ginger and garlic, where did the chopped green onion come from? (There is a precept in Zhu Bajie's Bajie, and of course, it is a different matter if it is a precept or not) It should be a flaw in detail.

6. Chapter 204 When Yang Qiuchi woke up on the huge stone pillar cliff (I forgot that chapter), when talking to Bai Sumei, Bai Sumei didn't even know Liu Ruobing's name and asked Yang Qiuchi, "Female Senior? Senior Liu?". Then Bai Sumei's fifth sentence said, "What are you doing when Liu Ruobing is caught?" Yang Qiuchi said only three sentences and more than twenty words, and there was no information about Liu Ruobing's name, but Bai Sumei knew it.

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7. Liu Ruobing robbed Qin Zhihui, Song Qing and Bai Sumei. Although they didn't say much between the gates, they probably couldn't say less. Liu Ruobing was covered with a veil, and the three of them could not see Liu's faces. However, when Liu Ruobing first "followed the army" in Qingxi County and Yang Qiuchi, the time was not too short. Qin Zhihui, Song Qing and Bai Sumei didn't recognize him?

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8. At Chapter 18, Yang Qiuchi had already tested Bai Sumei's "corpse" and found that Bai Sumei had no trace of sexual assault. It should also be concluded that Bai Sumei was a virgin, but after she arrived on the Shizhu Cliff, she tested Bai Sumei's * again. This is really a waste of effort. Chapter 93 Bai Qian General told Yang Qiuchi that Bai Sumei was a virgin.

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9. Yang Qiuchi was preparing to take his maid Yuechan into the house, and Yuechan was also happy about this, but later there was no further information. Although Yang Qiuchi had promised Liu Ruobing not to take a concubine, he should always give readers an explanation. The later Yuechan had fewer plays until it disappeared.

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10. The protagonist is a forensic doctor who travels through modern society. He should be a dialectical materialist (regardless of the philosophical topic of materialism who is right and wrong). He should look at the world from a materialist perspective. The so-called "martial arts" and "little brother" skills cannot be discussed. Although this is the yy idea of ​​every man, it cannot be out of line. This book is defined as a historical outline, so the content should not deviate from facts.

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(Although I have heard of similar kung fu, it is also in the novel. Although there are methods to exercise, it does not work so quickly) In short, it is better to be realistic. Similar shots have appeared in "Forensic Demons" and I hope they will not appear again. Sexual desire can be controlled by willpower. Wu Song, Liu Xiahui, and Tang Seng can both be done, and Yang Tashan should be done. After all, people are more rational than impulsive (some exceptions, but there are too many examples).

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11. In Guangde County, Mei Niang, the concubine of the magistrate of Song, and Hua Xiangrong, the concubine of Wu Ciren Mansion in Chengdu, had seduced Yang Qiuchi but failed, but I don’t know what the purpose of seducing Yang Qiuchi? Why didn’t the explanation? Is it because I stayed alone in the empty room for too long?

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Chapter 12.389 Hua Xiangrong, Chapter 390 Kuang Mi once misnamed Song Yuner as Miss Yang under the introduction of Yang Qiuchi, but after Duogansi (Chapter 397), Yu Xuan directly called Miss Song directly after the introduction of Yang Qiuchi "Mr. Yu, this is the sister of the sister" was introduced by Yang Qiuchi. Although Yu Xuan had been an official in Sichuan and had Wu Ciren's message, he shouldn't know so many things, nothing is detailed? Exaggerated.

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13. It is incredible that Yang Qiuchi had entered the tomb of Emperor Xian Concubine Yongle twice to perform the autopsy and Ji Gang sent people to the tomb to damage the remains. How can you enter the imperial tomb? (including the tomb inspection of the soil in Huiming) be impossible. For the specific reasons, you can refer to the popular tomb robber novels.

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14. The saying that Yongle and Yang Qiuchi exchanged concubines for concubines is even more y-Yang. No matter what the king does, he must discuss with his ministers, especially in the Ming Dynasty. When the Han Dynasty was the first Confucian and Taoist family, it was unrealistic to have such things happen. Hong Ling was not the daughter of Huanghua, and it was unlikely that she would enter the palace after changing her husband several times. It was certain that Chengzu of Ming Dynasty killed many concubines. However, historical records show that this person was not very lustful. He exchanged concubines for concubines because he was about 45 years old. He still used such a high spirit unless he took aphrodisiac. It was not that Yang Tashan was so anxious. When the emperor got old, he mainly chose concubines to prove to the world that "I am okay."

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As for the chance of "going for happiness", there are fewer opportunities. In ancient times, people got married early, approached women too early, and their yang energy faded prematurely. The ancient book suggested that men after 40s had sex once a month. It is reasonable to give Han King Zhu Gaoxu a more reasonable thing. Although it was possible to "change concubines" in ancient times, the emperor's concubine could not leave the palace to remarry. Even the palace maids after being "going for happiness" by the emperor, let alone the concubines called the concubines?

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15. The protagonist Yang Qiuchi has been lucky enough to have a lot of love and his wife has married a lot. The one who impressed people the most is the sisters Song Yuner and Liu Ruobing. The love with Song Yuner is like a stream flowing in the water; the love with Liu Ruobing is like a life after a disaster is unforgettable (so that some readers say that if Liu Ruobing dies, he will not read it). The others have become supporting roles, even Hongling and Princess Qingxi Yunlu are no exception. They spend too little pen and ink on others. After all, energy is limited, and it is impossible for every girl to have the same amount of pen and ink. Personally, Yang Qiuchi loves his women:

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Liu Ruobing>Song Yuner>Feng Xiaoxue>Hongling>Yunlu>Bai Sumei>Song Qing>Qin Zhihui, probably like this. Song Qing and Qin Zhihui are purely dispensable characters and occupy a lot of pens and ink. It would be better to delete these two people. It would be better to spend their pens and inks on other wives and concubines. Even Bai Sumei and Yunlu delete them, and use the words that the author said from Liu Ruobing's mouth, "Let me stay in the empty room alone, count the fingers and look forward to the days when you come? Let me be in the fifth update and still sleep alone, thinking that my husband is hugging another woman at this moment?"

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16. After Yang Qiuchi traveled to the Ming Dynasty, he basically did not (seldom) recall his parents and friends in his previous life. He only remembered his parents after he had a son in Chapter 405. This is a common feature in many time travel novels. Once a person leaves his life for more than 20 years and comes to a strange environment, it is impossible not to recall the past. Tell me, in fact, I have also "traveled" once, in a dream. This dream is very long, and I don't know what dynasty I have returned to, but it is ancient. I don't know what role I am.

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I just kept missing my homesickness, my wife, daughter, parents, and friends for about ten years, and I kept thinking about it. It was similar to that "Yellow Milk Dream". In the end, I had no achievements and woke up. After waking up, I was glad that it was a dream for a long time, and I didn't care about the era that "traveled through time". Although I still had the luck of love... I won't say it anymore, to prevent my wife from knowing.

There are many regrets in the novel, so I won’t talk about them. In short, the art of regret is also beautiful, and flaws do not hide the merits.

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The second part of the second part, "Forensic Detective", attracted people with fresh brushwork and humorous words, which made people unable to put them down. We all hope that this book will be written better and more yy, but at the same time, y still needs to be like the first part, with the plot of solving the case and the sincere love that touches people, and cannot be too out of line. Here, what point of my suggestion is that I hope Mu Yi will adopt 1% ​​I am grateful, haha.

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1. The problem of keeping manuscripts. Readers like to sit and not keep the manuscripts, and upload them if there is one. This feeling is understandable, but there must always be some room for space. Mu Yi said that there is no need to be verbally verbs, but I still want to say a few words: You cannot keep the manuscripts for the sake of monthly tickets. Just like the plot of the previous novel has many flaws, if you save more manuscripts, you can find and change them in time to avoid problems. Forensic majors should not be careless. Historical issues and even a person's title should be repeatedly considered, leaving few regrets.

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2. The protagonist's love story is indispensable, but the protagonist's wife and concubines should not have too many wives and concubines. In the future, there will be too many, and it will not be taken care of, so that readers will feel regretful. I suggest that 3-4 are enough, and it is best to have two concubines together. The protagonist's love luck must not be missing, but the protagonist Yang Tashan should have a lot of "roots" and not be moved by beauty (it seems to have this trend). Xing'er who has just appeared should be throughout the whole life, and it is okay to be a wife and concubine, but it should be the first person Yang Tashan loves, and he must be cared for.

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To be continued...