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Chapter 202 Brother Jie, you are really strong! Monthly ticket~)(1/2)

The camera zooms in.

But Li Shaojie in the camera smiled warmly and openly, without any other expression.

"Sorry, Teacher Li Shaojie, I want to know...why?!"

Deng Yujun seemed to have been greatly insulted, her eyes were red, and she asked Li Shaojie with a trembling voice.

"Yeah yeah!!"

"How can it only be 20 points?!"

"This is outrageous!"

"Isn't this just public revenge?"

"Perhaps, Li Shaojie seems to have always looked down on the ancient style circle..."

"How can you bring in private goods like this? Make it difficult for a girl to get off the stage?"

The audience's voice became louder and louder.

Li Shaojie was not angry, he smiled softly and waved slightly.

Then he said very seriously.

"I'm not insulting you."

"Don't worry, I'll analyze it slowly for you."

Immediately, the audience fell silent.

At least I still want to hear what Li Shaojie has to say, so that I won't become particularly riotous.

But I am still dissatisfied, for sure.

"First of all, everything is based on music and from an objective perspective."

Li Shaojie smiled slightly.

"I'm a music producer, so I won't judge based on subjective [whether it sounds good or not]. After all, everyone has their own tastes. This is the first thing to emphasize."

Seeing that the audience around them were dissatisfied but still nodded, Li Shaojie said with a smile.

"Since it is a program for singers and songwriters, my overall rating is biased towards three aspects."

"There are three types of work creation ability, singing ability, and performance on stage, each with 100 points, and the average is taken in the end. Is this fair?"

The audience couldn't help but nod.

Even the remaining three judges nodded slightly subconsciously.

That's fair.

"The first thing to talk about is creative ability."

Li Shaojie said in detail.

"First of all, the chords are the most basic column chords of 4536251, and the melody is quite satisfactory. There are no bonus points. I can only be said to be an entry-level singer-songwriter. I gave it a high score, a passing score of 60 points.

Wire."

"And the orchestration is even less impressive. The three instruments are the flute, erhu, and guzheng. Moreover, the harmony formed by the three instruments is too immature. The overall concert is very empty and has no filling content."

"Especially in the progression of expressing emotions, while using the guzheng as the base, it does not have a smooth rising effect. The timbre of the flute happens to sound at the same time as the human voice. This could have been a good idea, but your vocals

There is no color change at all, which also makes the sudden rise of the flute appear abrupt and monotonous, without forming a coordination."

"Not to mention some techniques for changing the basic tones of ornamentation and even the tonality."

"The interlude of the erhu could have been used, but because of the design of the flute and the human voice, the contrasting color of the fall that returns to the melodiousness is not strong enough, and there is not enough tension."

Li Shaojie shook his head repeatedly.

This horse riding... seems... really objective!

The venue suddenly fell silent.

Only Li Shaojie's unhurried voice commented.

"The rhythm and drum beats are very monotonous without any changes. It is difficult to make the song tense without changing the rhythm. The same simple rhythm pattern from beginning to end also makes the texture of the song loose."

"Even your deliberately rounded singing style itself has seriously affected the texture of the cadence of each phrase. The originally good progression and ending were added with strange transpositions, destroying the original cadence texture of the music."

"As for the lyrics... there's no big problem, but the specific imagery is really too fragmented, and people can't grasp the main idea. I summed it up, it's almost a... with a family feel.

In the midst of war and national sentiments [Jianghu chic]??”

Li Shaojie's words made Deng Yujun's face darken.

But there's really nothing to refute.

The problem of the ancient style circle forcefully creating a sense of ancient style without any formalities is no longer a matter of a day or two.

"So, to sum up, I think your composition ability has just passed, with 60 points. However, there are some minor flaws in the arrangement and harmonic flaws. In total, you have been deducted 20 points. This is very

It’s reasonable.”

Li Shaojie spread his hands.

A lot of well-founded analysis and this very rational and objective analysis immediately left everyone in the audience speechless.

I’m so stupid!!

Although in Li Shaojie's opinion, these things are professional and basic.

However, to other people's ears, it is like a heavenly book.

Some people even started to curse in their hearts.

[How can you analyze it after just hearing so much?! You can’t be fooling around!!]

But obviously, I dare not say this kind of thing.

Having said that, it would definitely be embarrassing.

Li Shaojie's words directly calmed the audience!!

With a slight smile, Li Shaojie continued to speak.

"Then let's talk about the second question, your singing skills."

This time, although many viewers were dissatisfied, they listened more patiently.

It seems that the problem is real and not something that Li Shaojie is messing with.

It seems...there really is no such thing as "I don't like listening to it, so I give it a low score".

All judgments are justified!!

"I can hear your singing skills. You haven't received any vocal training. Apart from the superfluous pitch changes, you have mastered other aspects of your pitch...actually it's pretty good."

good?

Many viewers were stunned.

Since you said it's okay, why is it so low?!

Before anyone could speak, Li Shaojie spoke first.

"But I'm very [amateur]. If I were evaluating ordinary fans, I might say it's really good, or that I sing well, but this is a professional stage for singers and songwriters. According to professional ratings, it can't reach 60 points.

, which is only forty points.”

Li Shaojie smiled slightly.

"Moreover, in this performance, your vibrato was very serious, the resonance area was very weak, there was almost no mixing sound, the closing was not bad, it could be said to be non-existent, and the breath was even more chaotic."

"To sum up the above, coupled with your superfluous transliteration, this problem is much more serious than the creative ability, so I can only give you 20 points."

All analyzes are still very objective and well-founded.

All are told the truth and are based on facts.

I can’t fault it at all!!

Even dissatisfied fans and viewers have been convinced!!

"Fuck! What is professional?! This is called professional!!"

There were many audience members in the audience who had long felt that Deng Yujun's singing was not good, and their faces were red with excitement.

Finally, a knowledgeable boss dared to stand up and talk about her problem!!

But many people suddenly realized something.

"its not right?"

Song Yumeng burst into tears.

"Creation is 40 points, singing ability is 20 points, so the average is 30 points. How can it be...could it be??"

Then, there was a look of disbelief!

Is it possible that the stage performance is completely lacking?!

After Song Yumeng's reminder, many people became aware of it.
To be continued...
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