End of this testimonial + report (1)
It took me more than a month to finish the book and it was a bit late.
But there are some things that I want to give you an explanation.
I wrote this book very passionately at the beginning.
Defend the country, nine storms; I am also very excited to write.
But when did it start... I feel something is wrong.
In some sense, this book is high and low.
The tone at the beginning was too high. Just like one day when I said in the chapter, I argued with a few book friends: You have been a soldier yourself, but we have never been. We read books to ask for happiness, but you insist on holding us to shout slogans together, and we don’t feel happy.
Yes, I don’t believe that there are still unpatriotic people. But the book friends are right. We are all patriotic, but we don’t want to read this book and have to shout slogans... This is not satisfactory.
And the subscription situation also reminds me that there must be some places that I didn’t choose the right one.
And by that time, the whole book had already taken shape.
Then I was thinking about changing.
Then the website came to me and said that the contract is about to expire, but your word count is much different.
This made me feel uncomfortable.
The word count issue is a big problem.
Then I began to bury the thread while changing, laying the thread of the Xuanhuang Realm; and then intervened with the fantasy world. Unfortunately, I only wrote the outline of the Tianxuan Continent before I opened the book; no matter how much water I was trying to make a desperate attempt, I could write three million... It was far from enough.
So the first half of the family, country and the world are purely fantasy.
But this change... I found that I made another mistake: many readers who have been following me are not happy: they are in high spirits, you are going to upgrade and fight monsters...
I was stunned at that time.
Keep writing on your head.
Finally, I finished writing.
But the real biggest mistake is not here yet.
That is Yun Yang's identity issue.
It was too early to reveal it!
Everyone saw, I'm mom, Mo Tianji's son... can he die? How could Mo Shenbang let his son die?
Therefore, the biggest suspense and the most heart-wrenching life and death crisis of the protagonist, the reveal of this identity made him feel no sense of crisis!
After writing that paragraph, I woke up and slapped myself seven or eight times: What do you think, I'm so stupid...
Many readers responded to me and said: Some of them are boring.
This is really not boring, because Mo Tianji is so awesome.
These encounters are heartbreaking if any protagonist is replaced. However, Yun Yang cannot do it after revealing his identity!
Too safe!
A big mistake.
Write it with the most serious attitude; however, it will never be eliminated!
This is the biggest failure of the book.
After writing it, I learned from my mistakes. In the next book, I can’t make such low-level mistakes again.
Thank you for your company and magnanimity along the way.
Chapter completed!