Not only Han Leng, but Zhao Youyue also noticed the explosion of the book review area of ​​"The Strongest King" at night. After all, it is the peak period for many readers to read. After everyone finishes reading, if they enjoy reading, some people will praise the author in the book review area, or even directly reward the author. If they are unhappy, or if they encounter poison, they will of course complain about the author.

Zhao Youyue saw that in the latest chapter of "This chapter says", there were more than a hundred complaints about the description of "Yu Shengfan" appearing, including words such as "embarrassing", "scathing blood", "eye-hit", and "unbearable to look directly". In the book review area, some complaints with a large number of words also appeared.

"What the hell is this female character 'Yu Shengfan'? Could it be that Rosemary wants to make her the heroine? If this is the case, I will definitely abandon the book. It's too poisonous!"

"It seems like I have seen the description of the vase lady in the ancient online article. Rosemary, I advise you to save money. I really don't write about female characters anymore. It's really embarrassing to see it, and it's like cancer... "

"Yu Shengfan got out of "The Strongest King", otherwise he would definitely abandon the book!"

"E-sports doesn't need a girlfriend, I beg Lin Feng to be lonely for the rest of his life!"

"As an old reader of Rosemary, this scene looks so familiar. You should admit it. Stop writing about female characters!"

"I felt relieved when I saw that everyone felt the same as me. Rosemary has a deep skill in the plot and game description, but the portrayal of this female character is really eye-catching..."

...

When Zhao Youyue saw the explosive book review area, she couldn't help but touch her forehead. She only hoped that Rosemary could have stronger psychological tolerance and waited for her to enter "The Strongest King" when she went to bed tonight to save "Yu Shengfan".

...

At the same time, Ye Hai was criticized by his beloved wife Li Mengyao, because Li Mengyao is also his reader and likes to read her husband's books very much.

Li Mengyao usually reads books on a tablet computer. She pointed to the description of "Yu Shengfan" appearance and scolded Ye Hai: "I'm telling you why you suddenly had a whim and wrote a female role? You can't write a female role well at all, why don't you admit this..."

Ye Hai looked embarrassed and smiled apologized: "Actually, it's not my fault. It's just a supporting role that a rich reader wants. Look, she has already given me 2,000 yuan in this book. She is the first fan of the book's leader!"

Li Mengyao looked at the fan list, and the number one among them was indeed the leader of the nickname [Youyue]. The other party not only rewarded the book, but also subscribed it all. But she laughed: "Do you think you have successfully pleased the rich readers? It's obvious that you offended others. If you write their supporting role like this, you may lose a reward in the future!"

As Li Mengyao said this, she couldn't help but remember the image of a heroine portrayed by Ye Hai using her as the prototype. Although the appearance was not as exaggerated as "Yu Shengfan", Mary Sue, embarrassing cancer, the subsequent description really made her want to kick her husband to death. That was definitely a high-end black man. She portrayed the heroine so silly and sweet, and the Virgin Mary disease. She knew that her husband should want to focus on the character of the heroine's kindness and innocence, but when she wrote it, the heroine gave people a feeling that was particularly pretentious and annoying. Anyway, it would be best if she was invisible.

So when Li Mengyao decisively stopped her husband's behavior when she said she wanted to write more interactions between the male protagonist and the female protagonist and show the beauty of love!

OK, that's just an exaggeration...

What made Li Mengyao very helpless was that Ye Hai seemed to be unaware of how bad he was in portraying female characters, and he also liked to show off his wife and wife. Look at how I wrote this passage, did he portray you very much like readers?

Like? Like a ghost!

It would be nice if you don’t hate it. If you like it, don’t dream!

Wake up quickly, my great writer Ye!

Finally, with Li Mengyao's strong intervention, the heroine, who was based on her, finally disappeared, and she could finally chase the book happily.

Li Mengyao has always been very satisfied with Ye Hai's new work "The Strongest King", because she has no female characters, and the plot is also very exciting and exciting, very powerful, passionate (basic love), and the setting of "Eternal Battle" is quite novel. After adding online game elements, the work becomes more full and attractive. At the same time, she also looks forward to the later regular e-sports part, just waiting for the protagonist to lead her "all-Chinese team" and fight against the Korean e-sports team led by the "Big Demon King".

As a result, he actually caused trouble for her by portraying a female character!

When Li Mengyao saw the awkward expression on Ye Hai's face, she couldn't help but sneer: "Haha, did I tell you this?"

Ye Hai took out his cell phone, opened the chat box with Zhao Youyue, and directly showed the chat record to his wife, saying: "I, a rich reader, have a good temper, but it's much better than you at that time."

After reading the chat records, Li Mengyao couldn't help but sigh: "This Miss Youyue is really rich. She rewarded you with 100,000 starting points coins in a disagreement. As a result, you ruined someone's supporting role. I'm drunk too! Is it because you treat the leader so badly? Also, what does it mean to be much better than me at that time? People don't know that you are using her as the prototype to portray this "Yu Shengfan". Besides, what do I have to do with you? Of course, I can complain directly to you. I just became a QQ friend with you, so I gave you a tactful opinion. I guess I couldn't help it."

Ye Hai smiled awkwardly, then looked at the book review area where he exploded, and couldn't help but feel guilty: "So should I just hide this female character Shenyin? Do you have any suggestions?"

He said that, but he had already decided in his heart that he would try to use the advice given to him by the leader of the [Youyue], which would be his last struggle. If he still couldn't satisfy readers, he would completely accept his fate and would never portray a female character again.

"Try it! I will always support you anyway. There is no way. As a wife, I, a wife, will not know how to write books, except for playing games with you, cooking and taking care of your children, but I don't know how to write books, but I feel that the advice given by the other party seems to be useful. If it can make up for your shortcomings in portraying female characters, maybe you can take a bigger step in the writing path!" Li Mengyao smiled. In fact, she had already seen the decision in her husband's heart, so of course she chose to support her.

Sure enough, Ye Hai breathed a sigh of relief, just holding his wife's hand, everything was silent.

...

That night, when Zhao Youyue was sleeping, skillfully pushed open the "dimensional door" in her mind and entered it-
Chapter completed!