Wonderful book review (1) [Poster] Youth Training----You Ai

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Yue Buqun and his wife love Yue Feng very much now, and Yue Feng wants to save them no matter what. (I really don’t know, I should be happy that he has become the protagonist of Da Da Wenwen, or that he is sad for being the son of Yue Buqun. I am entangled. I hope to see Yue Buqun who can feel another way in Da Da’s writing. Diving to read the following.) After that, Yue Feng had his own efforts and gained inner breath, and then Yue Buqun taught Yue Feng’s sword technique. Yue Buqun’s “intentional and unintentional” made Yue Feng specialize in research, and then "enlightened" it, which lasted for more than two years, and finally his internal strength increased greatly. The sword technique also gained a lot! After waking up, Yue Feng learned that his sister, Lingshan, was four years old. While playing with his sister, he met his mother, Ning Zhongze and Tian Boguang, and the insidious Tian Boguang attacked Xiaobudian Yue Feng and his sister.

At the critical moment, what happened to Yue Feng? And how did Linghu Chong become Yue Buqun's eldest disciple in the following text? And Yue Feng got a secret book, what was it? Could it be that Yue Buqun wanted to practice the evil-repelling sword technique? And hehe, it's all suspense, no spoiler! Diving to see the exciting following! Hahaha. You must also cheer for updates!

Seeing the names of the characters in Dada's writing, it was so familiar. It reminded me of a long time ago that I was actually very obsessed with the Swordsman, and I also like "A Laugh in the Sea". It is a very touching song, especially when I listened to the Swordsman together, I felt it more interesting! Now Dada has written another Swordsman, which is really good! So, Dada, I need to make a steady update, and I am looking forward to Dada's masterpiece! Hehe.

I also have a good grasp of time travel articles! Time travel is fast and not long-winded, and it also makes me feel happy to watch, and I won’t feel that the plot is slow! Hehe, I really like this feeling!

I think so. If I really write it as a very artificial and pretend to be a naive child, I will be confused. Fortunately, Dada's handling of this is really good. I will remember it secretly and learn it! Hehe!

Then I finished reading the article’s little suggestions, for reference only: Although my introduction is very straightforward, does it feel that it is still lacking in taste? Yes, it feels that it is lacking in attraction. Suggestions: I went to the forum to see what the article on the introduction will be helpful in writing the introduction! Hehe. Come on! Looking forward to it, I am waiting for a better introduction!

The plot lacks the setting of foreshadowing, I wonder if there is any feeling?! I personally suggest that if there is a small foreshadowing in each chapter to lay the groundwork for the wonderfulness of the next chapter and arouse the readers' urge to read the following text, this would be better! Hehe

The big block is pretty good, the plot is exciting and linked. I hope Dada can be updated stably. You should know that this is direct not only to affect Dada's contract, but also to affect the readers' follow-up. This is not worth it, right? If you have time, Dada chooses multi-village manuscripts. For Dada cannot update it in time, it is the best plan for the prerequisites! Hehe!

Posted by: You'ai Posted on: 2012-02-23

[First Floor] Reply: Youth Training---You're supporting Dada's good writing, another wonderful Smiling and Proud Wanderer! Come on, the stable update! Big quotes reply

Big, come on, update! @Why did you stop updating? Alas!

Posted by: You'ai's latest reply: 2012-02-24

[2nd Floor] Reply: Youth Training---You're supporting Da Da's good writing, another wonderful Smiling and Proud Wanderer! Come on, the stable update! Big quotes reply

It's going to be a good match, but for your long review, I'll update it right away

Posted by: I am Yingxuan’s latest reply: 2012-02-25

[3rd Floor] Reply: Youth Training---You're supporting Da Da's good writing, another wonderful Smiling and Proud Wanderer! Come on, the stable update! Big quotes reply

I am so moved by such a long comment!
Chapter completed!