Can you please stay calm and calm down in these two chapters?

When an ordinary person is reborn and gets a golden finger, there is always a growth process. During this process, you always have to meet old people in the past. I try to simulate reasonable character designs and plots while keeping the plot interesting, readable, and refreshing.

Here are some explanations of the recent plot:

Min Ting is a class beauty who fell in love with the rich second generation in high school.

The protagonist has heard that she was maintained in her previous life and was the RBQ of the rich and handsome guys. The protagonist also felt very uncomfortable. On the one hand, who has not faced the beautiful girl in the class in high school? On the other hand, when the protagonist comes back from being reborn and knows what will happen to her in the future, what will the protagonist think?

Save her? Change her life trajectory? Then the protagonist should first look at her nature. Is it worth saving? What if someone is "loving freedom and adventurous" by nature? You can save her... How to save her? Give her money, give her money, let her have food and clothing, and become the protagonist's canary.

The protagonist himself also thought about it, what if someone wants to fly out of the cage and into the sky? Can he keep his own abilities? In the end, he will be green on his head?

So, the protagonist wants to take his time, after all, it’s just the beginning, and there are still many years to come.

The protagonist is considered a crush on her. When she was in high school, she is reborn and has a golden finger. She is verbally and physically cheap. Knowing that she is vain and likes famous brands, she gives her some good things. What's wrong with teasing her?

Is it just a scumbag, a lowly, playing with people, dark

In Chapter 13, the protagonist asks Min Ting to go to his house to get his cell phone. Min Ting goes there, thinking that the protagonist wants to do something else with her, but the protagonist doesn't, just joked: "Didn't you say it during the day? I'll give you a cell phone when I learn to bark with a puppy."

Is there anything wrong with the plot and writing here? Is this disrespectful and playing with people? Isn’t it that I haven’t seen what I want to see, I haven’t seen the car, and I’m so angry?

Isn't it good to take your time?

The protagonist uses the word "puppy" instead of "dog".

The protagonist is not saying: "If you want a mobile phone, learn to bark with dogs? If you learn to bark with dogs, I'll give it to you!"

Are these two statements the same? I think that "puppy" is a kind-hearted joke for children.

Learning to bark at dogs... is a very harsh statement.

Is it too much to learn to bark with puppies?

In recent two chapters, the two drove to the Shanghai Stock Exchange. The protagonist was for the signature baker and Min Ting, for the party, listened to music all the way in the car. The protagonist asked her to sing and said that she would raise her salary and she sang.

This is not a playful person.

The protagonist gave her a Rolex worth 100,000 yuan and joked, "This is for others, not yours." I want to borrow this plot and deduce whether Min Ting is worthy of "changing the trajectory of life".

Here... is also said to be a playful person.

Then, all the way, I drove to listen to music. At dusk, the two stopped the car and it was natural. As the author, I thought it was quite sweet, and both of them were very happy and happy.

Here, the protagonist has become the "scumbag, pervert" mentioned by some book friends.

The protagonist took blood and thought a lot.

But the protagonist is not bad, because he goes to buy medicine on the street, and his inner activity is that the distance between the pharmacy and the hotel has become very long. Because he has thoughts in his mind, is it okay to not take medicine? Being born, being together? Or something else? After all, it may be a life, right?

Because of these activities, the road is very long.

The protagonist is not the kind of straight man who is careless and heartless to buy medicine for others.

Here, the protagonist performs this way and becomes a "scumbag" again.

Is it reasonable to just take medicine without mentioning this?

The protagonist woke up in the morning and thought about Min Ting's past and present life next to her. There are some pitying descriptions about her, which means that the protagonist is thinking seriously, not playing with people casually.

The protagonist seems to be serious with Min Ting. As a result, the first thing he did when he opened his eyes was: "I want that watch?"

The reality is that the two of them just had a sweet time yesterday.

It’s like you and your blind date were just sweet last night. When she opened her eyes in the morning, she said, “I want to buy the dress I saw yesterday!”

What is your mood? (The metaphor is not very appropriate)

The protagonist gave her the watch, and then gave her another 20,000 yuan, asking her to buy clothes and wear them to attend the birthday party.

Then the protagonist drove back to Haigang City by himself, and was squirted again, saying that he had thrown away the person.

It was thrown away, but the protagonist has logic and reason.

I couldn't resist being criticized by the group, so I came back and changed a plot. In fact, I had already written a plot of more than 100,000 words later.

Because I sprayed a lot, I came back to change it and released a "good-loving treasure pot" prop.

In the name of the system, let the protagonist come into contact with Min Ting.

I wrote about six chapters of the plot, but after just posting two chapters, I was criticized by a group, saying: "I feel disgusted, licking dogs, licking green tea bitches, being mean, scumbags."

In fact, although the plot has been changed, if you continue watching it, the author thinks that the plot is not poisonous and is quite good. What is certain is that the author did not treat her badly this time, but he did not lick her.

The author has grasped the balance between doing tasks, kneeling and licking, and treating her seriously. He has already written them all, and is now waiting to be sent out.

So, just wait until you finish watching this plot, if you don’t like it then, let’s spray it again.

The lesson I learned is: I will read book reviews from book friends in the future, but I will not easily change the outline. Perhaps the things I have written are just as I think step by step.

Finally, I have been on the six-frequency market these two days, and the recommended tickets are very good, but the collection is average, please votes and collect them all.

There are still friends who support me about this plot. The author is very moved and hopes that the subsequent plot can help you.

In fact, I originally wrote 3,000 words of explanation in one hour, all about the previous ones, Ji Wei, Zheng Xue, Zhan Mei, and Zhou Xinya. The author is defending the protagonist that he is not scum, not dark, nor is hesitant. Although this seems to be the case on the surface, the atmosphere of the whole book will support him and make him a qualified SUPERMAN.

I hope this article is a reassurance. I will not eat it if I read it. Now the chapter is smelly, that is not shi. Don’t doubt it. At most, it is durian or fermented tofu, it is not shi.

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Chapter completed!