Chapter 1862: Longhua Incident! (6)
"The article is well written, but some words are too classical Chinese. What I need is a language that ordinary people who are illiterate can understand!" After reading the article written by Du Xinyu on "Say goodbye to the consul's referee's power", Lu Shan gave a suggestion.
"How can anyone read an illiterate article?" Du Xinyu asked in confusion.
"Haha, reporter Du, you may think that only those who know the words can read newspapers and read news?" Lu Shan asked with a smile.
"Yes, aren't this kind of people who buy newspapers?"
"In fact, this is a misunderstanding of understanding. Can't illiterate people enjoy the ideological understanding and progress brought to them by newspapers and magazines?" Lu Shan said, "Ignorant people can also read newspapers and read news. For example, in many teahouses, there are newspaper readers who specialize in reading newspapers for customers. The teahouse is a public place, and those who are literate and illiterate can enter. The people also need to care about current affairs, which is closely related to their lives!"
"I understand. You mean that my article can be read by journalists, and ordinary people can understand what it means, right?" Du Xinyu was so delicate and clear about Lu Shan's intentions that she understood instantly!
"If you are writing documentary literature, then I ask your writing to be meticulously crafted. But if it is news or current affairs topics that the people are concerned about, then your articles should be written in vernacular, related nouns, definitions and legal provisions. Professionals naturally know that you do not need to explain one by one, what the people like to listen to and stories. If you want the people to read and listen to the articles you write, you have to use language that the people can understand. Simply put, it is vernacular. You look at the storyteller, who has been talking about the Three Kingdoms Water Margin for hundreds of years, but why do so many people like to listen to it?" Lu Shan said in a straightforward manner.
“Vibrant, interesting!”
"This is one aspect, and these stories enlighten people's wisdom and make people understand the truth. There is also the inheritance of culture. Although these legendary stories contain the wisdom of our Chinese nation, these are not lower than those Confucian works that have passed down from generation to generation!" Lu Shan said.
"Mr. Lu's view is very novel. No one has ever raised these popular novels of romance to the same level as Confucian classics!" Du Xinyu said.
"In the eyes of Confucian scholars, my point of view is probably a bit out of the classics, right?" Lu Shan smiled, "I haven't read many Four Books and Five Classics, and I can't even memorize the Three Character Classics and Hundred Family Surnames. I have heard people tell these stories since I was a child. My wisdom comes from here. Do you believe it?"
"I believe that didn't the Qing Dynasty conquer the world by relying on the "Three Kingdoms"?" Du Xinyu nodded and said.
"Okay. This topic is too heavy. Let's talk about your article!" Lu Shan said, "The name is very good, loud and powerful, the content is also about the point, and the arguments are very sufficient. The only shortcoming is the choice of words and sentences, which are too classical Chinese, and some vocabulary are too professional, which has a slightly higher requirement for readers!"
"Mr. Lu, I understand. Thank you for your suggestions!" Du Xinyu accepted humbly.
"Reporter Du, you have to remember that newspapers are aimed at the public, and their readers are very wide. From military and political officials, university professors, to peddlers, everyone who can understand Chinese is your readers. For a reporter, in addition to sticking to his professional ethics, you must also understand who your article is written for. This is not a flattery, but an attitude. Articles made of gorgeous words look good, but in fact, they are nothing to say, and at most they can win some applause. Who can remember afterwards?" Lu Shan carefully pointed out Du Xinyu, "You are a reporter, not a writer. Doing what you should do. Only the words that the people like are the most vivid and remembered!"
The more Du Xinyu listened, the more she felt that Lu Shan’s words had profound truths. These were things she could not learn in school. It was like a window opened on the dark wall, which not only allowed her to see the scenery outside the wall, but also let the bright sunlight shine in, making the whole house bright.
"Mr. Lu, then I'll take it back and modify it, and then take it over to show you?" Du Xinyu said.
"Well, okay, but it can't be too long. I'll leave it to me tomorrow morning. Can I do it?" Lu Shan asked.
"There should be no problem. I will modify it immediately when I go back!" Du Xinyu nodded.
"Then let's agree!" Lu Shan returned the manuscript to Du Xinyu with a smile.
"How is it, what does Mr. Lu say?" Feng Yun was even more nervous than Du Xinyu. This aunt's affairs were very troublesome!
"Mr. Lu said, my articles are too classical. You should try to be more vernacular. Only in this way can the people understand and understand!" Du Xinyu said.
"I can understand this, but I can understand it. What does it mean to understand it?" Feng Yun also gave up his head a little.
"Mr. Lu said that in China, there are only a small number of literate people, but illiterate people do not mean that they do not understand the needs of the people around them and domestic and foreign current affairs. The fate of the country and nation is closely related to every citizen. When we write articles and report news, we must let all the people clearly understand what is going on, not just some people know what is going on, but others don't understand anything. The article is too difficult to read and the people don't understand, so they naturally don't want to read it and understand it!" Du Xinyu said, "The influence of such articles will inevitably be weakened, and it will also affect the sales of newspapers."
"Is this what Mr. Lu said to you?"
"Most of them are, some are what I thought of myself!" Du Xinyu nodded.
"You didn't contradict him, did you?" Feng Yun asked carefully.
"Contradict it, what he said makes sense. Why should I contradict him?" Du Xinyu didn't quite understand what Feng Yun meant.
"Just not contradicting it!" Feng Yun smiled embarrassedly, "How can I say that the article has not been approved?"
"I'll go back and modify it, and I'll give it to Mr. Lu tomorrow morning!" Du Xinyu explained.
"Oh, that's it, that's good, that's good!"
"Secretary Feng, there's nothing to do, I'll go back first!" Du Xinyu was thinking about how to modify the manuscript, but she didn't want to stay for too long.
"Okay, you're busy, you're busy!"
Lao Dao’s case was a solution that both parties reached an acceptable solution, which also made Lu Shan’s heart fall into the ground.
But there is another trouble that has not been resolved, which is the magical betrayer: Xu Zhongyi, who caused huge controversy within the Dong Kang Kang.
Many officers of the 36th Division did not agree with accepting people like Xu Zhongyi. After all, he could betray his former troops, and during the exercise, such a utilitarian person was very unsuitable to stay in the troops!
But objectively because of Xu Zhongyi, the Red Army exercise troops successfully captured Mao Jingba and completed the task of the first phase of the exercise at a weak cost!
This is a meritorious. The rule in the army is to distinguish between rewards and punishments, otherwise this team will be difficult to lead!
Judging from Xu Zhongyi's performance, this person is a little utilitarian, a little clever, quite scheming, but still has some courage. Especially when he returned to Maojingba, he responded to Platoon Commander Li and the command of the Zhixing Special Forces. His performance can be said to be remarkable. The Red Army exercise troops neither hate or reject this person.
The problem is Xu Zhongyi's identity. He is a member of the Forty-first Army, a friendly army, not an enemy. Even if there is an accident during the exercise, or if he is captured, he should return to his original troops after the exercise!
If Xu Zhongyi is left behind, this is why Dong Kang violated the exercise regulations. But if Xu Zhongyi is returned, wouldn’t it be a typical example of killing a donkey?
What can Xu Zhongyi return to the Forty-first Army with the identity of a "traitor"?
The army's punishment for "traitors" is very serious. Although this is an exercise, he will not lose his life, but what will happen after that?
The 36th Division's opinion was that Xu Zhongyi could not hand over to the 41st Army, but he could not stay. He could give him some money and directly let him demobilize him, return to the mainland to buy a house and live his own life.
This is a way of compromise. As long as the 41st Army agrees that Xu Zhongyi is demobilized and he will naturally not be considered a traitor, and it will not be difficult to cause trouble for him in the future.
But if you listen to Xu Zhongyi’s own opinion, they are determined to join Donggong to do something. If you keep others out of the door, you always have to give a reasonable explanation, right?
It was enough to just find a political worker who could do some ideological work in this matter, but Qin Shiyu seemed a little interested in Xu Zhongyi. He went there in person and met Xu Zhongyi.
As for the Forty-first Army, Xu Zhongyi is no longer very important, but some generals are very dissatisfied with this compromise plan and are suppressed by Sun Kuiyuan.
The reason is very simple. Do you think his old face is not too embarrassing enough?
When it comes to Lao Dao, he took his old face to beg others, and then he answered that way to replace the punishment of Liang Shaofeng and Liang Xiaojie brothers. You know, how did Liu Heiqi and his men offend Dong Kang in the end?
Although Xu Zhongyi's affairs were a matter of Xu Zhongyi's personal character and infidelity, if Zhao Bin had not tried every means to persecute the other party, the other party would not have gone to this extreme. If this was known to everyone in the world, the Forty-one Army would have been laughed at again. Internal discord was actually the reason for the failure of this exercise.
Isn’t this saying that Sun Kuiyuan is incompetent in control?
Dong Kang was concerned about his face. Besides, even if such a "traitor" entered Dong Kang, he might not be able to be valued, so he just let him go.
Chapter completed!