During the break between commercials, some people were squatting in front of the TV anxiously waiting for the "Entertainment Intern" program to come back, but more people were caught up in heated discussions, which was as lively as a rare relaxing class break in student days.<

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In Qin Jue's family, there was even a Qingqing like Yan Liyue who took notes throughout the whole process and listed the details worthy of scrutiny and exploration. The eloquent article attracted everyone's sighs. At the same time, such version 1.0 analysis was also submitted to the program online.

The comment area of ​​the website, some sites, Vblog and other places triggered another round of exclamation.

【Excellent! The music director is so detailed!】

[Qu Nan: Are you polite (dog head)

[Good guy, I was stunned for a moment. Can this be called foreshadowing? The director and screenwriter of this group must have been in a stationery store!]

[Off topic, I didn’t expect it to be done by Qin Jue’s fans, so serious]

[Haha, the actor himself is amazing, and so are his fans and friends! # Thumbs Up]

[This is too powerful, and the analysis is organized and clear. The quality is really high, I admire it...]

[We don’t mean to make people angry. Let’s talk about it. It’s up to idols to live up to their own expectations and be able to perform well and perform well (dog head)

[Laughing, some people may be offended]

[Hey, people are so irritating that they are so popular. Some people can only copy some youth pain literature with copywriting, post pictures of underworld filters, and then blow some colorful rainbow farts. I won’t say who it is]

[Suddenly I felt a little emotional, look at the ecology of this rice circle, how great it is, the actors work hard and the fans work hard too]

[Don’t you know? Qin Jue has his own website, where his fans’ film reviews and analyzes are all included. There are also many people who gather together every day to encourage each other to study for postgraduate entrance exams. It’s a good group of kids]

[Hahahahahahaha, a passerby is here. Although I am not a fan and have not registered, I like to use tourist mode to visit Qin Jue’s place when I have time]

【Really? Then I’ll go and see it too】

This group of passers-by who were inadvertently attracted by Amway were immersed in clicking on the web page or downloading the APP. The cut-scene commercial of "Entertainment Intern" ended, and host Lin Yuqin's face appeared on the screen.

"Dear public judges, viewers in front of the TV and on the Internet, welcome back!" He said with a smile, "I'm really sorry, everyone's support is so enthusiastic. Our program team has not only gained a lot more since we reached the fifth round,

There are more viewers, more sponsors, and the advertising time has happily become longer."

There was a burst of good-natured laughter from the audience.

"So, it was our Group A's work just now. Their final rejection rate among the public judges was 43%, and their rejection rate among the four judges and teachers was 25%. They passed the test without any danger, congratulations to them!

”

Qu Nan and others stepped forward at Lin Yuqin's signal, and the audience also gave them a round of applause.

"Next is our usual comment session!" Lin Yuqin said in a measured tone, "I noticed just now that only teacher Zeng Xinhuiqin pressed the stop button. I believe everyone is curious about the reason for you to do this."

Zeng Xinhuiqin raised the desktop microphone to her mouth: "Qu Nan, your performance this time is far below my expectations."

She was merciless when she opened her mouth. Qu Nan shrank when he heard it, holding the microphone and nodding.

"Actually, what you are filming is a TV series, not a movie."

Zeng Xinhuiqin continued, "In a TV series with dozens of episodes, there is no problem in placing the Return of the Wild Goose chapter in the first half, but this is a movie. What we watch when watching a movie is not a unit drama, but the whole story."

Qu Nan's heart twitched from time to time as she commented, and he bowed slightly again and nodded vigorously.

"The plot structure is very poor, the transitions are clever, and the ink style is relatively innovative, but in some places it becomes a little clever."

Zeng Xinhuiqin focused on the group portraits of Guiyan Susu out for fun and the fight between father and son named Li in the later period, "You are greedy for too much, and you don't know how to adjust the proportion. Are the audience here just to watch your slide show?"

"...I'm sorry, it was my mistake." Qu Nan whispered.

"Since there are so many, why not continue to streamline the areas that should be condensed? Every shot of the movie is precious. The more you waste, the less qualified you are as a director." Zeng Xinhuiqin said.

She hit the nail on the head, like the scene between Qin Guiyan and Su Su. Qu Nan always wanted to design a step-by-step emotional development line, but due to the length of time, the parts that should be brief were not brief, and the audience adapted to this rhythm.

They couldn't get enough of the quick transitions, and they all expressed their desire to see more detailed daily routines, but in the end they ended up in a bad situation.

"You pay too much attention to details." Zeng Xinhuiqin's eyes were sharp and her expression was serious. "Your last round of works was not bad because its story was very simple and simple. But once it involves such a slightly complicated background story,

You can’t hold it anymore.”

"Being too obsessed with details will harm you."

Qu Nan took a deep breath and accepted the criticism.

Zeng Xinhuiqin's sharp comments were not finished yet. She turned over the recording paper at hand and asked again: "Did you delete Shen Danqing's part, or was the script just like that?"

"Uh." Qu Nan opened his mouth and glanced at the screenwriters He Jiayi and Wang Kaiyue unconsciously.

"It was filmed according to the script, right?" Zeng Xinhuiqin noticed his little move at a glance, "Okay, who of the two screenwriting interns will tell me the idea of ​​​​this character design?"

He Jiayi and Wang Kaiyue looked at each other anxiously.

"This." Wang Kaiyue thought about who he was as a man, and raised his hand nervously, "Yes, that's it, because the plot we got is more...detailed. When setting the characters, the character Shen Danqing was...

As the male protagonist’s old love appears, I am responsible for her life, and Bian He is responsible for the love-hate entanglement between her and Qin Feiyan.”

Zeng Xinhuiqin nodded indifferently: "What about temperament?"

He Jiayi hissed: "When we designed the three female characters, we aimed for different styles. Shen Dan was a sassy and strong girl when she was a teenager. Later, her family was exterminated and she met Qin Feiyan. She was born out of suffering.

It gives me stronger tenacity, and at the same time makes me more weak and dependent because of love."

"But due to Qin Feiyan's sudden departure, Shen Danqing fell into confusion and regret, and over time developed into resentment and resentment, and gradually became paranoid. So..."

"You're talking about settings, not people."

Zeng Xinhuiqin interrupted her.

He Jiayi was stunned for a moment.

"Where are the valiant strength of the past, the tenacity, weakness and dependence after the encounter?" Zeng Xinhuiqin asked.

"Uh..."

"You want to solve it just by remembering it, right?" Zeng Xinhuiqin looked at Qu Nan again, "It's stupid to compare Su Su and Shen Danqing twenty years ago."

She showed no mercy: "How can two women with different backgrounds, different experiences, and different personalities be compared together? What do you want to embody?"

Qu Nan and others lowered their heads.

【Too cruel】

[Zeng Xinhuiqin’s mouth has always been so vicious]

[Be ruthless, Director Zeng is right]

[I also think Shen Danqing’s two subsequent outbursts were good-looking, but they were too abrupt]

[Yes, yes, why do you suddenly have to die?]

[Of course it’s because she finally met Qin Feiyan, but ended up having an argument and then separated, so Shen Danqing went completely crazy? Isn’t it easy to think of this? I don’t think there is a problem]

[No, don’t get the point wrong. What Director Zeng meant was that Shen Danqing’s “strongness” was not reflected at all]

[Shen Danqing in Memories of Killing...well...seems to be an ordinary chivalrous sister]

[That’s true...]

[It is precisely because it was not reflected in the front that it seems that her paranoia later came too quickly.]

[In addition, many people at that time said that looking at Su Su would remind them of how sweet Qin Feiyan and Shen Danqing were back then. This is not the same thing at all. Does Qin Feiyan treat different women in the same way? Obviously not,

That’s why it’s weird]

【So that's it...】

[But I think Chen Danqing has already performed. Her performance is really good. Isn’t that appearance and He Yu in the back enough to express their past and Shen Danqing’s mental journey?]

[Then screenwriters and directors can’t rely on actors for everything? What do they do if they rely entirely on actors?]

[Listen, Director Zeng just said it]

"You want to keep it cool, but also make the characters full-bodied," said Zeng Xinhuiqin, who was sitting on the jury with her hands folded across her chest. "But the results are neither good nor bad. We can only rely on the acting skills of the actors to make up for the missing characters and settings in the script. In the end,

It’s still an absolute hero’s work, I can only say it’s slightly better, but I don’t think the 80% new and second-hand goods in the junk pile are anything to be proud of.”

"..." He Jiayi nodded with red eyes.

She was actually very aggrieved because the plot she was given was so disgusting that it was not easy to do this.

But I gritted my teeth and thought about it. In the future, when I work as a screenwriter, I will definitely encounter more disgusting parties than I imagined. It is even possible that I will not meet outstanding actors like Qin Jue and Chen Danqing, so I try my best to

I must swallow this discomfort.

"She just has too high expectations." Yue Yang came out to smooth things over, "I think Qu Nan has made great progress in aspects such as moving the camera, and it is a very significant improvement."

Zeng Xinhuiqin leaned back noncommittally, but did not refute.

Yue Yang praised a lot about the filming, focusing on the action scenes with Qin Jue. Perhaps Qin Jue already had a good reputation in "The Cage", but the judges didn't pay much attention to her outstanding performance in the scene.

It’s so amazing that I have the mentality of “it’s normal for a top student to get a perfect score”.

Qu Nan's mood improved, and he, the cameraman, artist and others all glanced at Qin Jue with very grateful eyes.

This kind of hard power during filming was a trick given to him by Teacher Qin. At this time, he got the affirmation of Yue Yang, and he suddenly felt that he was not that bad, at least there was progress and there was still hope.

"However, the short scene between Xue Yu and Qin Feiyan at the end." Yue Yang's comment was very pertinent, "It still tasted a bit uninteresting."

Qu Nan nodded sympathetically.

The romantic style is really not what he is good at.

"This also involves the issue of plot structure and resource allocation." Yue Yang said earnestly, "If you think about it, first streamline the plot and save the number of scenes, then less money will be spent on wires and special effects. Use these funds to rent

Isn’t it good for the program team to provide directors and camera assistants who are good at this style?”

Qu Nan was in a daze after hearing this.

Damn it, right?!

"Ah, I didn't, I didn't expect..." His face was full of regret and annoyance.
Chapter completed!