Chapter 618: A 10,000-word criticism

Lin Fan just sent someone away.

Another person came in.

Suddenly, he looked puzzled and walked towards Lin Fan.

"Mr. Lin, I just saw Mr. Lang from Huahun Company. Has he come to our company?"

"It's not because the box office is affected by us, let's find fault!"

Lin Fan shook his head:

"No, he is here to cooperate!"

I went straight on the road: "..." I took my ears and found out that there was something wrong with my ears?

After learning that it was really a cooperative relationship, I suddenly looked like I couldn't describe it.

Lin Fan smiled and said, "What kind of expression do you have? Our mythological universe project is too big. We must cooperate with many companies in our industry. It's okay not to cooperate, but the creation cycle will be very long!"

In the early stage, Lin Fan wanted to make several movies with quality like the Return of the Great Sage, which led to the mythical characters one by one.

Let these single-character-themed movies flash like stars and finally form lights.

This is a long process.

I still looked constipated on the road. No wonder I just saw Lang Qianfan leaving with a proud smile on my face.

If you cooperate with your opponent's company, aren't you afraid that the other party will deliberately make any trouble?

"Why not look for other companies?"

Asked on the way.

Lin Fan replied: "This is not because Mr. Lang came to him and his attitude is sincere, so he cooperated."

Sincere attitude!

So casual?

Xuan Shanglu looked helpless: "Mr. Lin, do you really think you can cooperate smoothly?

You know, our special effects master Po Xuanqi seems to have a grudge against them!"

Lin Fan: “…”

In the future, these two people will not fight each other.

A few days later.

The partnership between Huahun Company and Xingdong Animation Company has spread.

Not only the people from both companies were confused.

The news media that had been criticizing and criticizing each other before was caught off guard.

The family just now has a very beautiful scenery.

The family has become a joke.

Now the two companies are going to cooperate?

This world is so magical.

In the conference room of the Shadow Animation Company.

Several managers of the company also looked weird.

On the desk.

The person sitting on the left is from the company.

On the right is the man from the Painting Soul Company.

The theme of today's meeting is to revise the plot.

Everyone has read the script these days.

Lang Qianfan was holding a stack of information in his hand and sorted out a lot of criticism.

More than 10,000 words were written.

It shows their intentions.

The screenwriters who followed Lang Qianfan also looked proud, because after reading Jiang Ziya's script, they felt that they were not very arrogant.

The plot Lin Fan gave to Jiang Ziya is like this.

People in the world suffered from Shang for a long time, and Yuanshi Tianzun sent the nine-tailed fox demon to possess Daji, charming King Zhou and helping Zhou attack Shang.

This matter was only learned by the Heavenly Lord.

I hope to sacrifice the demon fox alone to speed up the demise of the Shang Dynasty to save the public's suffering.

Shang finally got destroyed as he wished, and the fox demon was sentenced to death by heaven.

However, when Jiang Ziya was executing his execution, he discovered an innocent soul besides the fox demon.

When Jiang Ziya was hesitating, the fox demon escaped and Jiang Ziya was demoted to the mortal world.

Later, in the mortal world, Jiang Ziya met Daji who had lost his memory. It turned out that when Daji was about to get married, he was leaned over by a demon fox, and the two of them used fate locks, resulting in a common life and death.

Jiang Ziya felt sympathy for the innocent human girl Daji and wanted to find a way to break the fate.

At the same time, I also learned that the Heavenly Lord was the murderer behind the instigation of the demon fox in troubled times.

However, the fate lock connecting the fox demon and Daji's soul was unsolvable. The Heavenly Lord deceived Jiang Ziya and asked him to send the innocent Daji to Guixu to reincarnate. In fact, it was not to reincarnate, but to the road to prison.

Jiang Ziya also learned that the demon fox tribe members were all locked by the Heavenly Lord, and they were all imprisoned here after their death.

But through this incident, Jiang Ziya also realized the path that belongs to him alone.

...

At this moment, the purpose of the people from the two companies is to improve the plot.

Lang Qianfan coughed and said all the inappropriate parts he had sorted out:

"To be honest, the first half of the plot is straightforward and the story is told smoothly, but after the Sibuli suddenly died, it is starting to make people unable to understand it here.

Let’s put it this way, it suddenly began to sensationalize, but this emotion could not be brought into the audience at all, so it seemed very embarrassing.”

The more Lang Qianfan spoke, the louder he became.

And Lin Fan's colleagues were not very happy.

The plot loopholes were actually raised by his previous subordinates.

How come there is a kind of thing that is like Lang Qianfan deliberately mocking them?

The situation is strange now.

Lang Qianfan and others, who were obviously defeated by their subordinates, were all confident.

On the contrary, Lin Fan's subordinates all had strange expressions.

I feel insulted.

But Lang Qianfan didn't care about this, he continued to give a speech.

Lin Fan also supported his chin and seemed to listen very seriously.

"There is also the sudden sacrifice of Shen Gongbao and Jiang Ziya saying goodbye to Xiaojiu and sending him to reincarnation. It should be a very touching part, but the emotions are not fully exaggerated.

It needs to be changed here too!”

Lang Qianfan finished speaking loudly, then turned to the next page and continued to recite.

"The plot logic of the latter part is also problematic, and it is completely unreasonable. The plot of several key points has not been explained clearly. Just talking about why the Heavenly Lord had to instigate the demon fox to chaotic times. It was just a summary of one sentence. It was just a word to say that it was to sacrifice one person to save everyone, not clear enough! Why did Jiang Ziya have to save the innocent soul on the demon fox at the beginning, and the character's motives were not explained clearly. Could it be that he was a great saint at the beginning?

Do you have to go against the Heavenly Lord?

I didn’t explain how the character was formed!”

The waves were flowing and chanting more than 10,000 words.

I directly thought about my colleagues in the Xingdong Company, and they all looked constipated.

This is too merciless.

I didn't let go of any loopholes, and almost derogated the plot to nothing.

What kind of character is unstable, open high and close low.

I almost had a temper, but I almost rushed to fight.

Is this for cooperation or provocation?

After listening to it, Lin Fan didn't look angry.

Instead, I discussed it with my colleagues: "In the next few days, I will follow these suggestions and modify the plot!"

"When the modification is completed, I will leave it to Huahun Company for comments and then modify it!"

After Lin Fan said this, it was hard for others to say anything.

Lang Qianfan felt happy.

It seems that we can continue to look for loopholes in the future.

that's all.
Chapter completed!