Chapter 619: Perfect the story!

After the meeting.

Several colleagues came to find Lin Fan.

"Mr. Lin, why do you want the other party to give advice? Look at their faces, they all feel so proud!"

"Yes, we can find loopholes by ourselves, why do we need them to come and find them!"

"It was them who asked for cooperation, but it turned out that they were the boss!"

Colleagues gathered in front of Lin Fan one by one.

Twist venting the dissatisfaction in my heart.

I just suffocated them.

Lin Fan patted a colleague on the shoulder and comforted him:

"Look at it, Lang Qianfan's personality is very good at finding fault!"

"If you change your own people, you will have some concerns, and the effect will not be so good!"

"You have also heard the unreasonable plots raised by the other party. What do you think?"

Now, my colleagues opened their mouths, but couldn't speak.

It’s true, it makes sense to put aside Lang Qianfan’s high-pitched voice and confident look, just looking at the other party’s opinions.

After understanding this, everyone became deeply impressed by Lin Fan's eyes.

Co-author, Mr. Lin is just making the best use of it!

It's really too clever.

When the box office of Langqianfan Company is affected, he will naturally feel a sigh of relief.

Now, by looking for the name of a plot loophole, I can breathe a sigh of relief.

I felt like I was doing it again in an instant.

I think Lin Fan’s plot is just like this.

I feel that both sides can be completely on par.

The previous resentment had long since dissipated, and after working together, everyone's anger was relieved.

After Lin Fan’s colleagues also understood Lin Fan’s intention.

In the following meetings, I was not so dissatisfied when I saw Lang Qianfan’s appearance, but instead smiled.

Watch Lang Qianfan perform.

No matter how confident you are, you will only use it for the best of your own business and use it to find loopholes.

What are you proud of?

More than ten days later.

The company once again held a discussion meeting on the plot.

At the beginning, Lang Qianfan wrote a 10,000-word criticism draft.

Later it was changed to five thousand words.

Later it was changed to one thousand words.

As for now.

Lang Qianfan coughed and said hesitantly:

"This, the plot is almost done."

This has been changed several times.

Half a month has passed

Lang Qianfan couldn't find any good suggestions.

In the first revision, Lang Qianfan gave the opinion that the role of fate lock as a key prop on the plot is not clear in the movie.

OK, it's not clear, right?

The screenwriter of Lin Fan made modifications overnight.

The resulting version is that from the beginning, Jiu Tai has been catching innocent Daji and Xiao Jiu, and has become a life community that makes Xiao Jiu and Jiu Tai more vivid.

In the original movie, the Nine-Tailed Fox seems to care about Xiaojiu's life at all, and changed it to Nine-Tailed Fox to believe that Jiang Ziya was sent by Yuanshi Tianzun to harm Xiaojiu.

The nine-tailed fox caught Xiaojiu to protect her, and the black foxes who had been beside Xiaojiu for ten years were actually silently guarding her.

Second modification.

Lang Qianfan’s opinion was that the motive of the Heavenly Lord instigating the Demon Fox was not explained clearly.

Why can we unify the three realms by using the Nine Tails to launch a war?

Therefore, in the plot, we have more opportunities to trace the story back and explain this motivation clearly. It turns out that the Three Realms War can make the tribe and the demon race kill each other and weaken each other, so that the gods can gain the faith of the people in a noble way, and faith can allow them to gain higher divine power.

Jiang Ziya's final cutting of the ladder also means cutting off human dependence on gods and relying on human beings' own efforts to create a beautiful and happy life. This idea has also been established.

It also highlights the theme that no one's life can dominate the sky.

Later, Lang Qianfan's people criticized the script again.

But it's already very difficult.

In the end, we can only say from a tricky perspective that the fox clan, as the victim, cannot empathize the audience.

I originally thought that this problem would inevitably stump Lin Fan and others.

Unexpectedly, within three days, a very perfect patch appeared.

In order to make all sentient beings suffer, a small footage showing the destruction of people's lives by war was inserted in the first half of the prefab.

Then when the Nine Tails reveal the truth, the previous memories are turned into the third perspective, which makes the audience realize that the fox tribe who was killed in front is actually the fox tribe, so that the audience can easily enter.

And now, it is the sixth meeting.

Lang Qianfan really couldn't find any good criticism points.

Seeing Lang Qianfan’s defeated look.

Lin Fan smiled: "Since that's the case, then the final script will be based on the current version!"

After saying that, warm applause rang out.

At the beginning, Lang Qianfan and others, who felt the plot was full of loopholes, were speechless and could only applaud.

Finally, Lang Qianfan gave a thumbs up: "Ah, your plot has changed so wonderfully!"

"Everyone has made a contribution!"

Lin Fan smiled.

Only then did Lang Qianfan realize that their existence was just to improve the plot.

He is not a superior existence at all.

In the end, Jiang Ziya's plot was modified to:

At the beginning, in order to make it more reasonable for Jiang Ziya to save the innocent soul on the demon fox, at the beginning, we first talk about how Jiang Ziya was a mortal, and finally finally became a disciple, and made up his determination to have the ability to save the suffering people in the future.

Then, with a community of shared future, the innocent soul Xiaojiu was protected by the demon fox.

Later, starting from the death of the cute pet Sibuli, Jiang Ziya went to question Yuanshi Tianzun, and Tianzun explained the way to unlock the fate lock (actually, he was cheating him), and then Jiang set out to Guixu.

On the way, Shen Gongbao intercepted Jiuwei and learned from Jiuwei that she was actually trying to protect Xiaojiu instead of trying to harm Xiaojiu. In the chaos, Jiuwei accidentally let him go.

After catching up with Jiang Ziya, Jiu Tai saw that Xiao Jiu was about to step into Guixu (Guixu was actually a sealed place and could not be reincarnated), so he stopped him without saying a word.

It was only halfway through Shen Gongbao that he came to explain something strange, Jiang Ziya and Jiuwei lifted the misunderstanding and explained the facts of the fate lock and the war.

At this time, Yuanshi Tianzun appeared and asked Jiang Ziya not to listen to the evil words and deceive the crowd. He removed his power and sealed his order to eliminate the demons, and personally pushed Xiaojiu into Guixu. In desperation, Jiutail destroyed Guixu and let the power of the resentful soul of the fox clan be gathered against the Tianzun.

Jiang Ziya, who found that all the dead under Guixu was shocked to realize the scam of the Heavenly Lord, and conjecture the truth of the war back then (retrospective of the story). He cut off the ladder of the Heavenly Lord when the Nine Tails restrained the Heavenly Lord, ending the people's dependence on the protection of the gods, but they did not know that it was actually a situation controlled by the gods.

In the end, Jiang Ziya and Xiaojiu will give you a formal farewell and become an ordinary person. In order to pass the trial, you must let the Heavenly Master suffer the consequences. If you don’t have to suddenly have a master and a master who will directly let the gods attack him.
Chapter completed!